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ellyunfortunetly (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
Beautiful poem. 5 stars.
BERSERKERpoetry (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
Thanks, friend.
tastetherainbow89 (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
this is very good..keep it up.
BERSERKERpoetry (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
I fact, I'd rather not look at it at all.
BERSERKERpoetry (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
Thank you, my friend.
BERSERKERpoetry (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
Thanks, mate. I've been good.Man, you know I just record stuff in whatever free time I've got. Whether or not I always look directly at the camera isn't necessarily on my mind.
korimito (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
I didn't die, it's only that I don't write much anymore."...Sometimes it's likePeople thinking they can feel your painAs if we're universalAnd we all hurt the same..."Excellent.Move the camera. I can tell you were looking at the screen; That took away from the power of the reading.How've you been? It's been a while, I guess.
janeczka (December 31, 1969 at 6:59 pm)
Love the loop, very well put together. Love the refrain also. |